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Poster for a Fancy Dress Ball 圣诞节化装舞会

更新时间:2013-04-19    来源/发布:www.en369.cn    作者/编辑:英语作文网

写作任务:

假如学生会要举办一个圣诞节化装舞会,请你制作一个英文海报,邀请全校同学和外籍教师参加。内容应包括:活动时间、地点、参加人,并特别注明舞会安排乐队演奏,供应饮料,但参加者必须化妆。

词数:120左右

参考词汇:化装舞会fancy dress ball

写作分析:

本次任务是写一份海报。海报(poster)是一种兼具宣传和通知性质的广告。其内容是向大众发布消息。为了使海报更有吸引力、更具宣传效果,海报的语言要力求简洁,通俗易懂。时态一般用现在时,句式应该以书面语中的简单句为主。海报的写作与通知有着相似之处,都必须包含一些基本信息,如活动的时间、地点和注意事项等。不同之处在于海报比通知在格式上更为灵活,语言表达上更为活泼。切忌将所给要点直接翻译,可适当发挥使行文流畅。

海报通常需要一个醒目的标题以吸引读者的眼球。海报的主体一般分为三个部分,第一部分直接点明主题,即谁要举办什么活动;第二部分交待基本信息,用语应清晰明了;最后可以对活动的特色做些简单描述以激发观众的好奇心。海报右下角应署名和注明时间。本次海报的主题是一个化装舞会。我们可以按照以上思路来安排文章:第一部分告知道海报的主要内容;第二部分交待时间、地点、参加方式等基本信息;第三部分可以特别注明舞会的特点来吸引更多参与者。

初稿:

A Wonderful Fancy Dress Ball

Hello, everyone! I have a piece of good news to tell you. Christmas is coming, and our school will hold a fancy dress ball to celebrate the festival.

The fancy dress ball will be held on October 31. It will be held in the classroom of Class Eight, Grade One. At the party there will be a band giving performances. Students coming to the party can enjoy all kinds of drinks as well as dancing, but you need dress yourself carefully. The party will start at 8 o’clock. All the students are welcome to join in. You don’t have to sign up before the party, just bring your best friends and be well prepared for it. We will have a surprise for the best fancy dress ball.

Have a good time on that day!

教师点评:

这篇作文基本符合要求,涵盖了海报要求的基本信息点。行文比较流畅,过渡自然,结构清晰。标题简洁醒目。但这篇习作在语言上有些缺陷,举例如下:1. 口语化的表达。例如,"Hello, everyone! I have a piece of good news to tell you."不应该
出现在海报中,应改为更为正式的书面表达。2. 语言累赘。例如,"The fancy dress ball will be held on October 31. It will be held in the classroom of Class Eight, Grade One."可合并为一句。3. 海报具有很强的信息性和时效性,所以诸如时间、地点这样的信息应放在文章靠前的位置。另外无署名和时间的海报缺乏有效性。

成稿:

A Wonderful Fancy Dress Ball

Dear students,

Christmas is coming. To celebrate the festival, the Students’Union has decided to organize a fancy dress ball. The party will be held at 8 o’clock on October 31 in the classroom of Class Eight, Grade One. A band will be invited to give a performance. At the party, students can enjoy all kinds of drinks as well as dancing. All the students are warmly welcome to join in, but please don’t forget to dress yourself in your favorite way. You don’t need to sign up before the party, just bring your best friends and be well prepared. I’m sure you will have a wonderful time.

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